2. I reviewed lots of constructive feedback after my first elevator pitch. Some people expressed that my pitch did not target a specific customer need. They said that it must need to reach out to a specific customer base. Someone also mentioned that I should maybe make a platform specifically for small artists.
2. This time I changed a couple things. I specified my customer base and showed them the customer need that my opportunity is satisfying. I also got more into the logistics of how I was going to create the platform.
Hi Bram,
ReplyDeleteI definitely feel like you did a good job of appealing to a more specific customer base in this elevator pitch. I think treating it as if you are talking to a customer, utilizing words such as you and the like, works really well in your video, as well as generally for these sorts of posts. I also think that pivoting to a platform specifically for small artists is a really good idea. I just got done volunteering at and attending Gainesville Fest this weekend, and I think a streaming platform that actively helps promote small artists and paying them a fair amount for their music would be widely utilized in the punk music scene, among others.
Bram,
ReplyDeleteI like the beginning of the elevator pitch and how you put everyone in the same context that you have. I think you would benefit more from making it a little bit longer and closing up the elevator pitch at the right point. I felt that you stopped in the middle of a thought that you had instead of making it come to an ending.